Task 2 — Discussion (Both Views)
Steel-manning each side · embedded opinion
Topic & Why It Matters
A discussion essay asks you to explain two different views on the same issue and then give your own opinion. The common wording is Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Candidates lose marks when they discuss only one side, when they make one view unrealistically weak, or when their personal opinion appears only as a vague sentence in the conclusion. A strong essay gives both sides fair space while still making the writer's judgement easy to identify.
Knowledge Points
Structure Template
Four paragraphs, about 260-280 words total. Give both sides a fair body paragraph, but make your own judgement clear from the start.
| Paragraph | Target | What to Write |
|---|---|---|
| Paragraph 1 — Introduction | 45-55 words | Paraphrase the issue, name both views briefly, and give your opinion in one direct sentence. |
| Paragraph 2 — View A | 75-90 words | Explain why some people hold the first view. Use a fair topic sentence, explanation, and a concrete example or consequence. |
| Paragraph 3 — View B + Opinion | 90-110 words | Explain the opposing view, then show why you find it stronger or weaker. This paragraph often carries your main evaluation. |
| Paragraph 4 — Conclusion | 35-45 words | Summarise both sides and restate your own view. Do not introduce a new reason. |
Vocabulary & Grammar Toolkit
| Expression | Usage Note |
|---|---|
| Some argue that... | Neutral opener for the first view; avoid 'some people think' repeatedly |
| Supporters of this view believe... | Useful topic sentence for a body paragraph |
| This view is based on the idea that... | Explains the logic behind a position rather than merely naming it |
| A reasonable argument is that... | Shows fair treatment of a view you may not finally choose |
| The opposing view is that... | Clean transition into the second side |
| Those who take this position claim... | Formal alternative to 'people on this side say' |
| I find the latter view more persuasive | Direct opinion when you prefer the second side |
| I find the former view more convincing | Direct opinion when you prefer the first side |
| While this concern is understandable, ... | Concession structure that still allows evaluation |
| This is not because..., but because... | Complex contrast for explaining judgement precisely |
| The main strength of this argument is... | Good way to develop a view before evaluating it |
| A limitation of this view is... | Useful when transitioning from discussion to opinion |
| in developmental terms | Academic phrase for education and childhood topics |
| structured classrooms | More precise than 'school places' |
| formal academic instruction | Clear distinction from play-based early education |
| play-based learning | Common education phrase; useful for childhood prompts |
| social and linguistic preparation | Lexical upgrade for 'getting ready to talk and mix' |
| developmentally ready | Concise phrase for age-appropriate learning |
| associate learning with pressure | Explains a psychological consequence |
| rather than... | Simple but strong comparison structure |
| instead of... | Alternative comparison structure; do not overuse in the same paragraph |
| Therefore, I believe... | Safe conclusion signal for restating your own opinion |
Common Pitfalls
| Mistake | Correction |
|---|---|
| Only writing about your own opinion | Give both views a real explanation. A single sentence saying 'others disagree' is not enough for Task Response. |
| Hiding your view until the final line | State your opinion in the introduction. The conclusion should confirm it, not reveal it for the first time. |
| Attacking one side unfairly | Use neutral language for both positions. Replace 'This idea is obviously wrong' with 'A limitation of this view is...'. |
| Using two body paragraphs with the same function | Body 1 should explain one view; Body 2 should explain the other view and, if appropriate, evaluate why your chosen view is stronger. |
| Adding a brand-new argument in the conclusion | The conclusion should summarise and judge. New evidence belongs in the body paragraphs, not at the end. |
Practice Prompt
Set a 40-minute timer. Spend five minutes deciding both views and your own judgement before writing.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people believe that children should start formal education as early as possible, while others think they should begin school at the age of seven.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
Model AnswerBand 7.5+ · 266 words
Debate about the right age to begin formal schooling often divides parents and educators. Some argue that children should enter structured classrooms early, whereas others favour delaying school until around seven. In my view, early exposure can be useful, but formal academic instruction should be delayed until children are developmentally ready.
Those who support an early start believe it helps children build routines and basic skills sooner. Regular lessons can familiarise young learners with listening to teachers, sharing materials, and following group instructions, which may make later schooling less stressful. Early literacy and numeracy activities can also identify learning difficulties before they become serious. For families where both parents work, preschool or reception classes provide a supervised environment that combines care with learning, so the argument is not only academic but practical.
The case for starting later is stronger, however, because very young children learn best through play, movement, and social interaction rather than long periods of sitting. If formal targets are introduced too soon, children may associate learning with pressure and failure, especially when their fine motor skills or attention spans are still developing. A play-based early childhood programme can still teach language, cooperation, and curiosity, but it does so through exploration instead of tests and worksheets.
Therefore, I believe governments should distinguish between early education and early schooling. Children can attend high-quality childcare before seven, but the formal curriculum should begin later, when most are ready to read, write, and concentrate for longer periods. This approach protects childhood development while ensuring that children do not arrive at primary school without social or linguistic preparation.
Annotated Commentary
Each paragraph is quoted, then broken down by examiner criteria. Notice how the essay discusses both sides fairly while making the writer's own position visible in the introduction, body evaluation, and conclusion.
Self-Check
Answer these from memory before looking back. If you cannot answer all, re-read the relevant section.
- What two commands must a discussion essay answer?
- Which paragraph of the model answer contains the writer's strongest opinion?
- Write one topic sentence that fairly introduces a view you do not fully agree with.