IELTS Writing · Ch 12

Task 2 — Discussion (Both Views)

Steel-manning each side · embedded opinion

Topic & Why It Matters

A discussion essay asks you to explain two different views on the same issue and then give your own opinion. The common wording is Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Candidates lose marks when they discuss only one side, when they make one view unrealistically weak, or when their personal opinion appears only as a vague sentence in the conclusion. A strong essay gives both sides fair space while still making the writer's judgement easy to identify.

Knowledge Points

Discussion essays have two commands
A prompt that says 'Discuss both views and give your own opinion' requires coverage of both positions plus a personal judgement. Ignoring either command limits Task Response, even if the language is strong.
Steel-man each side before judging
A high-scoring answer presents each view in its strongest reasonable form. Do not make one side look silly just because you disagree with it; examiners reward balanced development and logical evaluation.
Your opinion must be visible, not hidden
The safest approach is to state your view in the introduction, develop both views in the body, and confirm your view in the conclusion. You can also signal your judgement in Body 2 if that paragraph contains the view you find stronger.
Equal coverage does not mean equal agreement
You should give both sides fair explanation, but your final opinion can clearly prefer one side. Balance means fair treatment; it does not mean refusing to decide.
Topic sentences control the contrast
Each body paragraph should announce which view it explains. Phrases such as 'Supporters of early schooling argue...' and 'The opposing view is...' keep the essay easy to follow.
Do not turn it into an agree/disagree essay
If you only defend your own view, the essay becomes incomplete. A discussion essay needs a real paragraph for the view you do not finally choose.

Structure Template

Four paragraphs, about 260-280 words total. Give both sides a fair body paragraph, but make your own judgement clear from the start.

ParagraphTargetWhat to Write
Paragraph 1 — Introduction45-55 wordsParaphrase the issue, name both views briefly, and give your opinion in one direct sentence.
Paragraph 2 — View A75-90 wordsExplain why some people hold the first view. Use a fair topic sentence, explanation, and a concrete example or consequence.
Paragraph 3 — View B + Opinion90-110 wordsExplain the opposing view, then show why you find it stronger or weaker. This paragraph often carries your main evaluation.
Paragraph 4 — Conclusion35-45 wordsSummarise both sides and restate your own view. Do not introduce a new reason.
Balance rule: Give both views serious explanation, but do not confuse balance with neutrality. IELTS asks for your opinion, so the essay still needs a clear final judgement.

Vocabulary & Grammar Toolkit

ExpressionUsage Note
Some argue that...Neutral opener for the first view; avoid 'some people think' repeatedly
Supporters of this view believe...Useful topic sentence for a body paragraph
This view is based on the idea that...Explains the logic behind a position rather than merely naming it
A reasonable argument is that...Shows fair treatment of a view you may not finally choose
The opposing view is that...Clean transition into the second side
Those who take this position claim...Formal alternative to 'people on this side say'
I find the latter view more persuasiveDirect opinion when you prefer the second side
I find the former view more convincingDirect opinion when you prefer the first side
While this concern is understandable, ...Concession structure that still allows evaluation
This is not because..., but because...Complex contrast for explaining judgement precisely
The main strength of this argument is...Good way to develop a view before evaluating it
A limitation of this view is...Useful when transitioning from discussion to opinion
in developmental termsAcademic phrase for education and childhood topics
structured classroomsMore precise than 'school places'
formal academic instructionClear distinction from play-based early education
play-based learningCommon education phrase; useful for childhood prompts
social and linguistic preparationLexical upgrade for 'getting ready to talk and mix'
developmentally readyConcise phrase for age-appropriate learning
associate learning with pressureExplains a psychological consequence
rather than...Simple but strong comparison structure
instead of...Alternative comparison structure; do not overuse in the same paragraph
Therefore, I believe...Safe conclusion signal for restating your own opinion

Common Pitfalls

MistakeCorrection
Only writing about your own opinionGive both views a real explanation. A single sentence saying 'others disagree' is not enough for Task Response.
Hiding your view until the final lineState your opinion in the introduction. The conclusion should confirm it, not reveal it for the first time.
Attacking one side unfairlyUse neutral language for both positions. Replace 'This idea is obviously wrong' with 'A limitation of this view is...'.
Using two body paragraphs with the same functionBody 1 should explain one view; Body 2 should explain the other view and, if appropriate, evaluate why your chosen view is stronger.
Adding a brand-new argument in the conclusionThe conclusion should summarise and judge. New evidence belongs in the body paragraphs, not at the end.

Practice Prompt

Set a 40-minute timer. Spend five minutes deciding both views and your own judgement before writing.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe that children should start formal education as early as possible, while others think they should begin school at the age of seven.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Write at least 250 words.

Planning reminder: Write one sentence for View A, one sentence for View B, and one sentence for your opinion before you begin the essay. If one of those sentences is missing, the plan is incomplete.
My Response
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Model AnswerBand 7.5+ · 266 words

Debate about the right age to begin formal schooling often divides parents and educators. Some argue that children should enter structured classrooms early, whereas others favour delaying school until around seven. In my view, early exposure can be useful, but formal academic instruction should be delayed until children are developmentally ready.

Those who support an early start believe it helps children build routines and basic skills sooner. Regular lessons can familiarise young learners with listening to teachers, sharing materials, and following group instructions, which may make later schooling less stressful. Early literacy and numeracy activities can also identify learning difficulties before they become serious. For families where both parents work, preschool or reception classes provide a supervised environment that combines care with learning, so the argument is not only academic but practical.

The case for starting later is stronger, however, because very young children learn best through play, movement, and social interaction rather than long periods of sitting. If formal targets are introduced too soon, children may associate learning with pressure and failure, especially when their fine motor skills or attention spans are still developing. A play-based early childhood programme can still teach language, cooperation, and curiosity, but it does so through exploration instead of tests and worksheets.

Therefore, I believe governments should distinguish between early education and early schooling. Children can attend high-quality childcare before seven, but the formal curriculum should begin later, when most are ready to read, write, and concentrate for longer periods. This approach protects childhood development while ensuring that children do not arrive at primary school without social or linguistic preparation.

Annotated Commentary

Each paragraph is quoted, then broken down by examiner criteria. Notice how the essay discusses both sides fairly while making the writer's own position visible in the introduction, body evaluation, and conclusion.

[ Thesis ]Paragraph 1 — Introduction
Debate about the right age to begin formal schooling often divides parents and educators. Some argue that children should enter structured classrooms early, whereas others favour delaying school until around seven. In my view, early exposure can be useful, but formal academic instruction should be delayed until children are developmentally ready.
Thesis'formal academic instruction should be delayed' gives the writer's own view clearly
Paraphrase'right age to begin formal schooling' reworks the prompt without copying it
Cohesive device'whereas' contrasts the two positions in one concise sentence
Complex grammar'but formal academic instruction should be delayed until...' combines contrast with a time clause
Lexical upgrade'structured classrooms' and 'developmentally ready' are precise education phrases
[ Topic sentence ]Paragraph 2 — First View
Those who support an early start believe it helps children build routines and basic skills sooner. Regular lessons can familiarise young learners with listening to teachers, sharing materials, and following group instructions, which may make later schooling less stressful. Early literacy and numeracy activities can also identify learning difficulties before they become serious. For families where both parents work, preschool or reception classes provide a supervised environment that combines care with learning, so the argument is not only academic but practical.
Topic sentence'Those who support an early start...' clearly identifies the first side
Cohesive device'also' adds a second benefit before the practical family argument
Complex grammar'which may make later schooling less stressful' uses a relative clause to explain consequence
Lexical upgrade'familiarise young learners' is stronger than 'make children know'
Balanced developmentThe paragraph explains the early-start view fairly, even though it is not the writer's final choice
[ Evaluation ]Paragraph 3 — Second View + Opinion
The case for starting later is stronger, however, because very young children learn best through play, movement, and social interaction rather than long periods of sitting. If formal targets are introduced too soon, children may associate learning with pressure and failure, especially when their fine motor skills or attention spans are still developing. A play-based early childhood programme can still teach language, cooperation, and curiosity, but it does so through exploration instead of tests and worksheets.
Topic sentence'The case for starting later is stronger' introduces the second view and embeds the opinion
Cohesive device'however' signals contrast with the previous paragraph
Complex grammar'If formal targets are introduced too soon...' uses a conditional clause for cause and effect
Lexical upgrade'associate learning with pressure and failure' explains harm more precisely than 'feel bad'
Task responseThe writer discusses the second view and evaluates why it is more persuasive
[ Conclusion ]Paragraph 4 — Conclusion
Therefore, I believe governments should distinguish between early education and early schooling. Children can attend high-quality childcare before seven, but the formal curriculum should begin later, when most are ready to read, write, and concentrate for longer periods. This approach protects childhood development while ensuring that children do not arrive at primary school without social or linguistic preparation.
Thesis restated'distinguish between early education and early schooling' restates the balanced judgement
Cohesive device'Therefore' marks the final judgement clearly
Complex grammar'while ensuring that...' adds a second result without starting a new argument
Lexical upgrade'social or linguistic preparation' is more academic than 'ready to mix and speak'
No new argumentThe conclusion summarises the body logic instead of adding fresh evidence

Self-Check

Answer these from memory before looking back. If you cannot answer all, re-read the relevant section.

  1. What two commands must a discussion essay answer?
  2. Which paragraph of the model answer contains the writer's strongest opinion?
  3. Write one topic sentence that fairly introduces a view you do not fully agree with.
Answers: (1) It must discuss both views and give the writer's own opinion. (2) Paragraph 3, where the writer says the case for starting later is stronger. (3) Sample: 'Supporters of early schooling argue that it helps children build routines and basic skills before primary school.'